These days a lot of people have their own computer and telephone. It has become quite easy to do job from home.
Do you think it has more advantages or more disadvantages?
In modern world, technology has revolutionized our lives. Along-with numerous other astonishing changes that technology has brought to us, there is one of particular importance and that is the possibility of being able to work from virtually anywhere, depending on the nature of the work and availability of the required technology. Now-a-days many people possess personal computers and telephones, making it relatively easy to be able to work from home. Where there are pros of such luxuries, there are some cons as well. I personally believe there are more benefits of this very notion, if people organize themselves properly.
In the first place, hefty amounts of money along-with precious time, while travelling up and down the work can be saved, if people can perform their duty from home by taking advantage of the technology. For instance, those who are associated with e-commerce industry, most of them have the opportunity at hand to take care of 99% of their business operations from home. So, with the help of technology it has actually become possible to save travelling costs and time.
Moreover, by working from home, people can manage their own hours, providing them more opportunities to spend time with family or getting enrolled in valuable courses, enhancing their personal capacity. This can be further explained by the example of a person, who manages his business from home, can start a digital marketing course in the morning and working in the afternoon. Hence there number of instances where people can put themselves in a schedule that suits them the most.
Since, every luxury comes at a cost similarly, home based working individuals pay the price by getting themselves socially disconnected. By staying at ease most of the time, they so lazy to keep in touch within their social circle.
To recapitulate, there is no denying the fact that, there are more benefits of being able to from home with the help of technology, than the drawbacks, provided that one is equipped with exceptional organizational and personal management skills.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...e morning and working in the afternoon. Hence there number of instances where people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, hence, if, moreover, similarly, so, well, while, for instance, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15773809524 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83341930392 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574404761905 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8765151184 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.785714286 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182602599805 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063379676588 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055672325225 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988998984607 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036889229798 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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