Write a letter to the manager to complain about the problems that you met on the flight recently. 3.46 - 4.00
In your letter, you should:
- give details of flight
- what were the issues with the flight.
- what you want the manager to do about it.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter regarding the pathetic service and the unprofessional attitude of your staff, which I witnessed as I was flying back from Malaysia to Auckland in flight number B-106201.
I had requested for a Jain meal prior to the flight for which I had also received a confirmation mail, that I am attaching with this letter. However, I was served with a Vegetarian meal at the lunch time, which I could not consume because of religious beliefs. Your staff was unapologetic for their mistake, furthermore, they served me with few loaves of bread, yogurt and fruits as there was no other food option available.
It was a long 14 hours flight and I was starving the entire journey. I would want you to take some strict actions, against this incident and also get compensation for the discomfort that I had to suffer.
I would be eagerly waiting for your response.
Thank you,
Ashish
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r your response. Thank you, Ashish
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 160.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84375 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71275200442 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 506.74238477 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4202728809 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.875 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155782891758 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712681908194 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041275256519 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832841900514 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352731103025 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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