First impressions are important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing a good job.
To what extent do you agree?
It is thought by some that in order to get a good job candidates should do well during the interviews as first impression is crucial. In my opinion, while human resource managers make decision after interviews, I believe that people should have an appropriate background in order to safe a job place.
When people show their good sides during the interviews it gives them more chances to get a job. These is because human resource managers before inviting candidates to the interview check their curriculum vitae. HR managers check carefully their level of education, working experience, soft skills and working experience and if candidate have appropriate background they invite him to the interview. Invitation to the interview means that he will be accepted if he has communication skills and kind person. Furthermore, during the interview managers communicate with candidate and assess person as a future worker and if he satisfy their requirements they offer him to pass probation.
On the other hand, in order to safe a job place in future or to pass trial period, candidate should have real work experience, knowledge and dedication to their work. When people start to work at new place they get different tasks to be completed, then managers evaluate their work. Another point to consider is education, as some jobs which are connected with science include many tasks which should be done according some rules and laws. Furthermore if a person complete all tasks during probation period he successfully gets permanent job offer if not he loses his job.
In conclusion, although mangers make final decision after interview I consider that rich working experience and education is a key to safe a job place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 302, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ackground in order to safe a job place. When people show their good sides during the...
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Line 2, column 97, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[4]
Message: Did you mean 'this'?
Suggestion: This
...t gives them more chances to get a job. These is because human resource managers befo...
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Line 2, column 624, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'satisfies'.
Suggestion: satisfies
...ess person as a future worker and if he satisfy their requirements they offer him to pa...
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Line 3, column 440, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
... be done according some rules and laws. Furthermore if a person complete all tasks during p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, then, well, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11743772242 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80110285901 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537366548043 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5524614623 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 119.833333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167816266923 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075076813833 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880730214526 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119990759969 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068734775046 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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