The pie chart below give information about the satisfaction levels of customers of a cafe in January and then in August in the same year.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart compares the proportions of customers' satisfaction levels in three categories in January and August of the same year. Overall, service quality of cleanliness, staff service, food choice and quality have improved in eight months.
The most remarkable feature, as can be seen clearly from the illustrated chart, shows that the percentage of customers' satisfaction and very satisfied with the cleanliness and the quality of staff service was nearly unchanged from January to August. The former at 54% and the latter at 65%. By contrast, the rate of customers' dissatisfied with these two services decreased about half ( from 26% to 15% respectively).
Looking closer at the remaining item demonstrates that the rate of assessing food choice and quality of a cafe shop declined significantly at the level of dissatisfaction ( from 48% to 17% ). On the other hand, this rate experienced an increase at the level of satisfaction or higher.
It is evident that thanks to the level of customer satisfaction, the quality of the cafe's services becomes better in the same year.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... these two services decreased about half from 26% to 15% respectively. Lookin...
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...ficantly at the level of dissatisfaction from 48% to 17% . On the other hand, thi...
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...evel of dissatisfaction from 48% to 17% . On the other hand, this rate experience...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23121387283 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03424872835 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595375722543 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7259259186 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.125 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180921856295 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900192090941 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093109309963 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125167734281 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469027818272 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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