colonization on asteroid
The reading and the lecture both about an asteroids.Asteroids are best colonization option for people.The author of reading believes that, it is best option for colonization for some reasons. The lecturer casts doubts on the reasons made in article.He thinks that colonization on asteroids is not good idea.
First of all, the author says that asteroids are smaller than planet so it has lower gravity. It is safer for spaceship to landing. He admits that it allows more equipment to carry which needed for colonization. It is easy to take off spaceship from there. This point is opposed by the lecturer. He says that, lower gravity increase the risk of health problems.Furthermore, he points out that, it reduce the bone density and looses the muscles.So the people cannot suffer it for longer time.
Secondly, the author states that asteroids are rich in elements which are rare in earth. The gold and platinum which are valuable elements which makes profit for people.The lecturer rebuts this reason. He argues that transportation cost become high than actual business of metal. He elaborates on this by mentioning that, there is no guaranty that price of metal remain same .If metal find in asteroids are larger in amount then market price will decrease.
Finally, the author mentions that it is easy to reach on asteroids than to reach moon or mars. He is of the opinion that many asteroids orbit around the sun nearer to earth. So it is affordable also. The lecturer, on the other hand, states that it is not easy to return all the time .He puts the forth that asteroids orbit around sun are not regular in distance to earth. If it travels far away from earth then it is challenge to return back to the earth.
In conclusion, the lecturer effectively casts doubt on all the reasons presented in the reading.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an asteroid' or simply 'asteroids'?
Suggestion: an asteroid; asteroids
The reading and the lecture both about an asteroids.Asteroids are best colonization option ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Asteroids
...and the lecture both about an asteroids.Asteroids are best colonization option for people...
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Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the best'.
Suggestion: are the best
...cture both about an asteroids.Asteroids are best colonization option for people.The auth...
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Suggestion: The
...are best colonization option for people.The author of reading believes that, it is ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: He
...s doubts on the reasons made in article.He thinks that colonization on asteroids i...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ization on asteroids is not good idea. First of all, the author says that ast...
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Suggestion: Furthermore
...ty increase the risk of health problems.Furthermore, he points out that, it reduce the bone...
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Line 3, column 400, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reduces'?
Suggestion: reduces
...ems.Furthermore, he points out that, it reduce the bone density and looses the muscles...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...the bone density and looses the muscles.So the people cannot suffer it for longer ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le cannot suffer it for longer time. Secondly, the author states that asteroi...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... elements which makes profit for people.The lecturer rebuts this reason. He argues ...
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Line 5, column 377, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...guaranty that price of metal remain same .If metal find in asteroids are larger in...
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Suggestion: If
...aranty that price of metal remain same .If metal find in asteroids are larger in a...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...aranty that price of metal remain same .If metal find in asteroids are larger in a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...unt then market price will decrease. Finally, the author mentions that it is ...
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Line 7, column 197, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...un nearer to earth. So it is affordable also. The lecturer, on the other hand, state...
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Suggestion: .
...at it is not easy to return all the time .He puts the forth that asteroids orbit a...
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Suggestion: He
... it is not easy to return all the time .He puts the forth that asteroids orbit aro...
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Line 7, column 375, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n are not regular in distance to earth. If it travels far away from earth then it ...
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Line 7, column 433, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...away from earth then it is challenge to return back to the earth. In conclusion, the l...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...allenge to return back to the earth. In conclusion, the lecturer effectively ...
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Line 9, column 61, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... lecturer effectively casts doubt on all the reasons presented in the reading. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.4613686534 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 22.412803532 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1373.03311258 111% => OK
No of words: 311.0 270.72406181 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88745980707 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75349319133 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 145.348785872 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51768488746 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 419.366225166 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 3.25607064018 399% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.1230964208 49.2860985944 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4444444444 110.228320801 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2777777778 21.698381199 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06452816374 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 4.19205298013 525% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252877329286 0.272083759551 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712884627811 0.0996497079465 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946157541745 0.0662205650399 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126741467882 0.162205337803 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122882146081 0.0443174109184 277% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.3589403974 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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