In recent society, more and more people are trying to live by their own. Is this a positive or a negative trend? What is your opinion and share your personal experiences?
Nowadays, the trend of living alone is increasing especially; people living in metropolitan cities are bound to stay alone. The rate is far higher in developed countries as compared to developing countries and it seems quite normal for people living there. In my opinion, this trend has far more negative consequences than positive ones.
Admittedly, it is prevalent that people in the current generation like to live alone, without anyone’s interference. it gives them a sense of freedom to do whatever they want to do without any directions from their parents. Furthermore, it makes them self-dependent and more responsible for their day-to-day life. A single person family has to do household chores also and forces them to work as well to pay their utility bills, cleaning, cooking, planning of future savings, purchasing daily commodities and many more important skills. For instance, people living far away from their families for their tertiary degrees learn more skills are more responsible as compared to people who stay with their families.
From the opposite point of view, the trend of single person family has several negative effects. The increasing trend of living alone has a direct impact on the mental wellbeing of a person. Several psychological problems are directly associated with it. living alone only creates loneliness and depression unlike people living with family have many people to talk and someone to share their distress and sadness. This often leads people to choose a lifestyle that is often negative. In a recent survey, single person family members often rely on drugs and many of them addicted. Man is a social animal and living alone is against their natural tendency.
To conclude, living alone has its own pros and cons. it could lead to more freedom and fewer worries as one has to deal with less number of people. it could also lead to weak ties with the family and independently dealing with the problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, well, as to, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.115625 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67628291374 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3603928749 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9444444444 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72222222222 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302728798103 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922389825272 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673554772244 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17248783472 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612006910969 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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