If a product is sold and people buy it, then advertising is not necessary and can be considered a kind of entertainment.
Do you agree or disagree with this?
It is thought by some that if companies sell their products and people purchase them, the advertising should be considered as type of entertainment. In my opinion, I disagree with the statement as advertisement attract people to buy products and help them to make right choice.
Firstly, it must be admitted that advertisement can help companies to sell their products and services worldwide as this is only one way to show new product to public. When companies launched a new product that is unique and have new technology features or if their product is in high quality and they sell it for reasonable price. They should inform about as more people as they can and there is only one way to make it, is to create advertisement campaign around the world. As a result, advertisement helps to companies to increase their sales and earn more money. Furthermore, company will have enough money to improve their products and services.
Another point to consider, is that people can find out about details and advantages of product through advertisement and decide to buy it or not beforehand. In addition, people can compare benefits of products by watching advertisements and this opportunity offer people to make right choice. Moreover, advertisements help to companies to inform people about new achievements around the world. The reason of this is that due to globalization and developing online television people can watch overseas TV channels from their homes.
In conclusion, advertisement is beneficial for companies and for individuals as it helps to boost sales for companies and to buy good products to individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 512, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'company'.
Suggestion: company
...ld. As a result, advertisement helps to companies to increase their sales and earn more m...
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Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'company'.
Suggestion: company
...hoice. Moreover, advertisements help to companies to inform people about new achievements...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13962264151 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0417388368 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483018867925 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3875225037 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 113.5 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289573952323 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122898214056 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674241667514 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190710038568 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830063487317 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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