These days more fathers stay at home & take care of their children.while mothers go out to work.Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
It is no doubt mother is backbone in whole family.All family member have dependent on the woman.The root can that some people ponder that female must right live life is own mood.The strong opinion these days father can obligation about take care of kids and house.There are manifold reasons.This essay throws some light an all aspect to the see in the right perspective.
The seeds to the issue are multiheads.There most predominant nowadays women are equal participation all the module relate the male.For instance, study ,outdoor games ,actress , business , teacher ,doctor ,and police officer so on .Hence female would give the hundred proportion in their work. Otherwise,they must very responsible,diligent,
honest do all the job like housewife and good society person.Moreover they can do it everything in our life such as they should help in their family but also female might stand in their career through they could not dependent on their family.
Nevertheless, there are no dying in my point of view it is no matter girls should do the job after their married life.Therefore they can handle professional than personal life in our life.As well as woman have very smart and intelligent.Furthermore they does not lose her temper in any situation.Last but not the least it is no immense deal father stay at home and take care of their juveniles.Then male have always support of woman, wife , daughter ,
mother and foregather.
All said and done ,I reckon on one hand modern world in the modern think about off spring can process development of their nation.On other hand ,I can say that these days is no big matter women have done job in their life.Thus everybody think that they can growth up in whole life.
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- some people belive that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters(such as food ,clothes,entertainment )is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes.Other people believe that it is important fo 73
- In many places the role of mother and father are changing It is positive and negative development 65
- Television has had a significant influences on the culture of many societies.To what extent would you say that television has positively and negatively affected the cultural development of your society? 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i reckon, no doubt, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03146853147 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06149614089 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611888111888 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.2975951904 281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.5181856999 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 287.8 106.682146367 270% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.2 20.7667163134 275% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.0 7.06120827912 411% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 42.0 5.01903807615 837% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17199608235 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878663645881 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322424522956 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865960565977 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265532327642 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.9 13.0946893788 236% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.62 50.2224549098 27% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.1190380762 245% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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