Major threats to reefs
A glance at the bar graph provided reveals the measurements of threats to reefs with different reasons. And it also give information about destroyed destroyed coral reefs in The Pacific ocean, The Caribbean and Antlantic ocean, The Middle East, The Indian ocean and The southeast and East Asia.
First of all, Overexploitation give medium threat about 20 to 40 percent, while, high threat is around 20 percent. least affection on reefs by coastal development and it was nearly 5 percent as well as high threat increas upto 30 percent. Inland pollution had majority of high threat which above 10 percent, while Marin based pollution had 10 percent medium threat.
Secondly, it is shown from the graph that there are some coral reefs were destroyed. In the Pacific ocean, 7 percent of trees and crops were destroyed. Caribbean and Antlantic ocean destroyed 22 percent coral reefs, while, 35 percent reefs destroyed in the Middle east.The highest proportion of destroyed reefs was in Indian ocean. 34 percent of destroyed coral reefs were in Southeast and East asia.
Overall, it can be seen from the graph that the overexploitation has majority to threatend to reefs and the Indian ocean destroyed highest coral reefs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67116079636 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7754828298 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 1.13902439024 878% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.131783984741 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646889286813 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190133879427 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561254700461 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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