It is usually foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job? Do you agree or disagree".
Recently, the phenomenon of getting married before completing studies and getting established in a good job has sparked a heated debated. Although contested by some that the matter of early marriage has several disadvantages, others believe that it is right to get married before getting settled in the society. I am inclined to believe that child marriages are bane for society and i will discuss this throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, the decisive role of early marriage in human's life can provide the society with some noticeable side effects which are rooted in the fact that our adolescent mind and bodies are not capable enough to handle the responsibility of another person. These marriages often force the person to live a life which is below average standard because they were simply not ready for it. For example, child marriage is common in india but majority of population involved in this act are below poverty line. Thus, correlation between early marriage and poverty can be scene.
With in the realm of society, people who choose to get married after settling in society have a higher chance of a successful marriage. Their mind and bodies are ready to handle the responsibility offered by marriage which works in their favor in the longer run. For instance, a successful person with higher education and job are much better provider for their wife and children than a person who is not working. Hence, education and a job is neccessary to fulfil the responsibilities which comes with marriage.
To conclude, there are several compelling arguments which states that early marriage can alter a person's whole life, I profoundly believe that a person should be able to support himself/herself before getting married. Not only do the disadvantages of early marriage have significant aftereffects on person's life, but also pinpoint long term implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 307.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16286644951 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82110266573 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540716612378 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 512.1 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1467668435 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.923076923 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1625588994 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706103344133 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125571243428 0.071462118173 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115099953638 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122701584275 0.0609392437508 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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