Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries. Others however, believe it is unnecessary because TV and the Internet can give all the same information
it is often argued that travel around the world to learn about different countries is vital for our acknowlegment, while the other disagree because they think every information needed can be gathered from TV and internet. In my opinion, I believed by going to more places, an individual can be given tremendous merits, especially for the youngers.
On one hand, there are vast discrepancies between knowledge from books and reality, so the eager to experience real places cant be denied. When people leave their comfort zone to new lands, they might witness sceneries and the beauty of natural world that they havent seen before nor cant be expressed by any photographs. Moreover, the attempt to making new companionships on the go can tie everyone together, regardless their skin's colors or nationality. For instance, many couples found each other in their trips and got married. Thus, the youngsters should have the chance to leave their nests, otherwise, by not going anywhere could arise their arrogants.
on the other hand, information from the internet is not always precisely, but rather fake news. If we rely on everything searched on Google, we would end up wondering whether it is authentic or not. Additionally, by looking at pictures on website, we might find that all views are resemble, therefore, it lost the meaning of true beauty of our surroundings. despite the drawbacks, there are certain advantages by suffing the internet such as fast and convenient way of appoaching datas.
in conclusion, i firmly believe that people should try visiting different countries to gain themshelves useful knowledge and put color in daily life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16791044776 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8309930428 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671641791045 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4562707997 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.416666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186417746004 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587522536152 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768398361465 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106267125984 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805607352833 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.