Any recent Invention that you think proved beneficial or detrimental to society. What is the recent invention that you encountered? Discuss it's advantages and disadvantages.
Recently, the invention of smartphones and it's usage have sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that in this day and age smartphones are highly beneficial, others believe that it's detrimental to our society. I am inclined to believe that recent inventions like smartphone's can be a stepping stone to the future and I will discuss the same throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, the decisive of role of smartphones in human lives can provide some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that this invention has shrunk the world and brought people together. According to my own experience, connecting with other's have never been so easy, that is it today, with just a click of button we can talk to anyone anyone in the world. Therefore, beneficial ramifications of these device in our daily lives can be seen.
Within the realm of society, higher usage of these smart devices might increase the consequences to our lives. Unknowingly we are becoming addicted to these devices, which not only creates new health issues but also increases financial burden on people. For instance, staring at the mobile screen for a longer period of time eventually weakens the eyesight and release of new phones forces the consumer to spend money on latest technology. Hence, correlation between smartphones and their negative effects on our lives can be observed.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of this recent invention far outweigh it's drawbacks. Not only do the advantage of this cutting edge technology prove the significance in our lives, but also pinpoint long-term implications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: anyone
...h just a click of button we can talk to anyone anyone in the world. Therefore, beneficial ram...
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Line 3, column 421, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this device' or 'these devices'?
Suggestion: this device; these devices
... Therefore, beneficial ramifications of these device in our daily lives can be seen. Wit...
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Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...aring at the mobile screen for a longer period of time eventually weakens the eyesight and rel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19413919414 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8211930106 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626373626374 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8832833262 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.166666667 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126252386908 0.242375264174 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454907682671 0.0925447433944 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441290926984 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797276466238 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556471372206 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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