An email A trip with your class

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Hello Bill,How are you? I went on a trip with some fr...
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Suggestion: We
...th some friends from my class last week.We went to the pyramids in Giza.I saw thre...
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...st week.We went to the pyramids in Giza.I saw three pyramids and a lot of tamples...
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...saw three pyramids and a lot of tamples.There were a lot of tourists.They come from d...
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...of tamples.There were a lot of tourists.They come from different countries.They took...
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...ists.They come from different countries.They took some photos and they bought sivuni...
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...k some photos and they bought sivunires.It was an amazing trip.I enjoyed a lot.&nb...
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...bought sivunires.It was an amazing trip.I enjoyed a lot. that was the first ...
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...as the first time to go to the pyramids.I played with my friends.We rode the came...
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...o the pyramids.I played with my friends.We rode the camel and we took some photoes...
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... rode the camel and we took some photoes..There were camels and horses too
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...ode the camel and we took some photoes..There were camels and horses too
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 11.0 33.7804878049 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 384.0 965.302439024 40% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 80.0 196.424390244 41% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.99069756244 3.73543355544 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16217883745 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 57.0 106.607317073 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7125 0.547539520022 130% => OK
syllable_count: 113.4 283.868780488 40% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 8.94146341463 22% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 207.0 43.030603864 481% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 192.0 112.824112599 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.0 22.9334400587 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149863716951 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764448319014 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764448319014 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764448319014 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764448319014 0.0819641961636 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 13.2329268293 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.8 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.3012195122 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 40.7170731707 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.4329268293 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.0658536585 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.