School

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I work at Al-koam Al Ahmar mixed prep sc...
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...rk at Al-koam Al Ahmar mixed prep school . The school is quite far from my home . ...
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...l . The school is quite far from my home . It's about 17 kilometers away . Th...
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...ome . It's about 17 kilometers away . That's why I use my own vehicle to...
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...why I use my own vehicle to go to school . There are seven classrooms in our schoo...
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...There are seven classrooms in our school . Each class has about 50 students .The s...
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...chool . Each class has about 50 students .The school consist of five floors . On t...
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...ool . Each class has about 50 students .The school consist of five floors . On the ...
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...dents .The school consist of five floors . On the ground floor there are a big hal...
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...s . On the ground floor there are a big hall for meetings and the teachers' bat...
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...meetings and the teachers' bathroom . On the second floor , there are the hea...
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...ers' bathroom . On the second floor , there are the head master's office...
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...re are the head master's office and a big library where pupils can read thou...
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...ks and enrich their knowledge and brains . On the third floor there are two classe...
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...and enrich their knowledge and brains . On the third floor there are two classes ,...
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...On the third floor there are two classes , the computer laboratory and a room for ...
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...puter laboratory and a room for teachers . On the fourth and fifth floors there on...
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...er laboratory and a room for teachers . On the fourth and fifth floors there only ...
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...urth and fifth floors there only classes . At the end of the corridor there is a r...
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...dor there is a room for the psychologist . T he teachers there are friendly and qu...
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...eachers there are friendly and qualified . They encourage students to read and st...
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...achers there are friendly and qualified . They encourage students to read and stu...
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...hey encourage students to read and study . Teachers use different teaching methods...
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... Teachers use different teaching methods . They use for example brain storming , d...
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...ds . They use for example brain storming , discussions , role playing . The studen...
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...for example brain storming , discussions , role playing . The students live in a r...
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...in storming , discussions , role playing . The students live in a rural community ...
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... rural community so they are very polite . This helps their teachers to teach them...
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...hers to teach them values and principals . During the year , there are many activi...
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... values and principals . During the year , there are many activities held at schoo...
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...there are many activities held at school . Sports day is an important festival in ...
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...y is an important festival in our school . In my point of view , our school is a g...
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...ival in our school . In my point of view , our school is a good home for students ...
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...for students to learn and acquire values . The only problem is that our financial ...
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...is that our financial support is limited . Hence , we can't do our activities...
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...our financial support is limited . Hence , we can't do our activities as we w...
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... can't do our activities as we want .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, second, so, third, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73221757322 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63161830498 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581589958159 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 1.44329896907 485% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 12.6804123711 173% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5233796757 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 51.4090909091 76.5299724578 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.8636363636 16.8248392259 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.86363636364 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 37.0 2.54639175258 1453% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 3.94845360825 355% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298591669998 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982187175741 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133584928795 0.0603063233224 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298591669998 0.12726935374 235% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.97 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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