THE GRAPH SHOWS THE DEMAND FOR ELECTRICITY IN ENGLAND DURING TYPICAL DAYS IN WINTER AND SUMMER.
THE PIE CHART SHOWS HOW ELECTRICITY IN AVERAGE ENGLISH HOME.
The graph gives data about the amount of electricity required typical days in England during winter and summer, while the pie chart illustrates what the aim of electricity in regular household England. Overall, the using of electricity in England has an upward trend in the winter. Furthermore, electricity used the most popular for heating rooms and heating water.
It is clear from the line graph that there is a fluctuation in demanding for electricity in both winter and summer. At 3 hours, the requirement of electricity in winter rises considerably whereas the amount of asking for electricity in summer saw a slight decrease, about 40,000 and 15,000 respectively. Furthermore, the consumption of electricity in winter in England is higher than in the summer. At 21 hours, the asking for electricity for winter peaks at around 50,000.
We can see from the pie chart that 52,5% as the most favourite for using electricity to heat rooms and waters at household in England. Standing on the second top in using for electricity is kitchen devices, with 17,5%. On the other hand, the use of electricity to electric devices is least popular, just 15%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, second, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04712041885 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88428934471 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528795811518 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6702415839 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405842100031 0.215688989381 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189787566023 0.103423049105 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834130719757 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297206219762 0.15604864568 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657672432451 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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