There will be a traditional celebration in your country and you want to invite your friend
from an English-speaking country. Write him/her a letter and
- invite your friend,
- explain what happens at the party,
- describe the tradition and why it’s important in your country,
- say why it is important for your friend to be there.
Dear Matt,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing in reference to invite you to a traditional festival " Deepavali" which will happen in India next month. Let me explain in detail.
To elucidate it will be an alluring experience for you in India as the festival of lights is approaching, therefore, you must come. The celebration happens every year in the month of October to commensurate the victory of good over evil. it is said in the Hindu mythological books that Lord Rama fought against Ravana an evil soul to protect humanity. In order to celebrate the local people dress in traditional attires and light candles and lamps in their houses followed by prayers in the temples. additionally, adolescents and juveniles too celebrate by lighting crackers. Since the majority of the people practice Hinduism hence this festival is of great significance to the locals. Although the celebration begins a week in advance, however, the prayers are offered to goddess Durga on the 19th of October.
Lastly, I feel that it is necessary to experience such a celebration as such festivals happen once in a year. additionally, during the festival, my parents are going to announce my engagement so you have to be present on this special occasion.
Looking forward to your response and seeing you soon.
Best wishes
Saud
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Matt, Hope you are doing well. I am writing in...
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...ensurate the victory of good over evil. it is said in the Hindu mythological books...
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Suggestion: Additionally
...ses followed by prayers in the temples. additionally, adolescents and juveniles too celebrat...
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Suggestion: to celebrate
...additionally, adolescents and juveniles too celebrate by lighting crackers. Since the majorit...
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...s such festivals happen once in a year. additionally, during the festival, my parents are go...
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Suggestion:
...ponse and seeing you soon. Best wishes Saud
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, lastly, look, so, therefore, well, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03167420814 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9093650348 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633484162896 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8101271786 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4285714286 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7857142857 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213688176614 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588250296753 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603902907308 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131086170768 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599884906434 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.