Write a letter to your manager to tell him/her about some company documents that you lost while
traveling with them. Please say
– What were the documents?
– Where and when did you travel with them?
– Suggest a solution for this situation.
Dear Mr. Sam,
I am writing to inform you about some lost documents during my last trip. I need to kick off whit the fact that I really apologies for what is happened. Regarding to our contract with Italian company (Roche) I had a trip to the country to visit the common project and estimate the next expenses that should be paid by us, therefor I carried documents related to calculations which contain our mystery and secret surveys. My return flight was on 2nd Jun with flight number ABC and the ticket was purchased from Turkish airline. Since strict times had been passed during the trip, I slept all the time and papers were forgotten to pick up when I arrived.
Based on your name is written above the papers, I would appreciate if you could contact with the airline and ask them to find documents and send us. Please mention that although these data is beneficial for no one, they are worthwhile for our company.
Please do not hesitate to contact me, if you need more detail.
Sincerely Yours
Solm
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...need more detail. Sincerely Yours Solm
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59668508287 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30191233606 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.71270718232 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.5619618164 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4444444444 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260793119856 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885097847308 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598218790399 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151820844221 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473525680617 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.