last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends
write a letter to your friends. In your letter
Thank them for the photos and holiday
explain why you didn't write earlier
invite them to come and stay with you
Dear Samira,
I hope you and your family are doing well. I'm just writing to thank you for sending me the photographs of the holiday that I spent with you.
I've no words to thank you for such a great vacation. you're the most wonderful host I've ever seen because I didn't feel homesickness while staying with you. Also, thank you for sending me the photographs that I took at your home and some tourist places.
I'm so sorry because I didn't write to you earlier. Do you remember I told you that I had a major assignment to finish? I have been working on that project since I arrived home.
As I have completed my assignment, I want you to come and stay with me next month. we will enjoy a lot because there is a big festival in our city. Also, it will give you a chance to know our culture.
Let me know about your decision.
Best wishes,
Mandeep
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Samira, I hope you and your family are doing wel...
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Suggestion: I'm
...ope you and your family are doing well. Im just writing to thank you for sending m...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...f the holiday that I spent with you. Ive no words to thank you for such a great ...
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Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Youre
...to thank you for such a great vacation. youre the most wonderful host Ive ever seen b...
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...to thank you for such a great vacation. youre the most wonderful host Ive ever seen b...
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Suggestion: I've
...vacation. youre the most wonderful host Ive ever seen because I didnt feel homesick...
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Suggestion: didn't
... wonderful host Ive ever seen because I didnt feel homesickness while staying with yo...
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Suggestion: I'm
...t your home and some tourist places. Im so sorry because I didnt write to you e...
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Suggestion: didn't
...ourist places. Im so sorry because I didnt write to you earlier. Do you remember I...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...ou to come and stay with me next month. we will enjoy a lot because there is a big...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 703.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33950617284 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30739551748 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635802469136 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3813256795 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.0769230769 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4615384615 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.61538461538 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416453141561 0.216113520407 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143175112122 0.0766984524023 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992333293578 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228966823269 0.12726935374 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999354045904 0.0580467560999 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 8.37731958763 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.0 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.28 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.