In general, people do not have such a close relationship with their neighbours as they did in the past. Why this so, and what can be done to improve contact between neighbours?
In the past, neighbourhood members had friendlier and closer relationships with other members than now, this could happen for reasons that society's evolution has brought to our current lifestyle. In this essay, I will expose some reasons why this is happening also some solutions to improve this weak relationship between neighbours.
Firstly, if we talk about the reasons why people are having a colder relationship with neighbours, is impossible to omit the effect that communications such as TV, radio and internet has over our current society, real and fake news makes people feeling unconfident with everyone around because unfortunately the majority of news is showed raw by media, this cause paranoia in community and the instinctive reaction is to avoid the contact with people around, in this specific case "contact with neighbours". Secondly, our current society has been having one of the most accelerated lifestyles in humanity's history, the day by day is going quick and busy. people now have very limited time to share with neighbours even tho, to share time with friends or families.
Hence, people have to make a stop in their rapid lives to try to meet new neighbours and improve contact with them, for instance, with the excuse to borrow any Item from your neighbour, you could start a little chat with them and that would be the first step to start to have empathy with them. In addition, the community could promote neighbourhood activities such as plant some trees or a cleaning campaign could motivate to talk to each other.
To conclude, the relationship between neighbours has been affected by the insecurity feeling created by media causing paranoia in society, and accelerated lives created by our rapid lifestyles. However, individuals should take the first step to have better contact with their neighbours, also the community could perform some activities to promote interaction between neighbourhood members.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31511254019 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89217884347 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553054662379 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.888627081 49.4020404114 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 183.666666667 106.682146367 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5555555556 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8888888889 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328865963626 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124527569589 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731606607777 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192921549541 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351424986106 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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