men and women are not suitable for every job because of their inherent physical differences
While some people can argue that men and women are not suitable for every job because of their inherent physical differences, but other would state that both of them are enable to work side by side that means there is no difference between them based on work types. In my view, both of men and women have enough potential to do any kind of work in our modern world.
Firstly, women plays an important role in every sector of work with dignity and excellence. Both Indore and outdoor work today done by both men and women equally. In every developing country like India, Bangladesh, Pakistan there are thousands of women and men works in garments factory. Where both of them work up to same working schedule and wages. There is no difference between them in workstation based on there gander.
Secondly. in every profession like doctor, engineer, architecture there are no difference between men and women based on there physical difference. On the other hand, sometimes both of there perticipation are almost proportional. In corporate office like bank and difference company many women have hold the top most position along with men.
Finally, some people may think that women are not suitable for heavy job like construction, labourer etc kind job. But in a survey it was seen that about half of the worker in heavy kind job women's participation are almost equal to men worker. So, there has no option to blame them that because of their physical difference women are not suited for many task.
Although participation of men and women in work place are almost similar, sometimes women have some problem with late night work like call center job. Sometimes some conservative family don't want there daughter work outside the home, there husband may be don't like that his wife work outside home. But in our modern world things changes. So, today women are free like men to every work.
In conclusion, there are no scope to blame women for their inherent physical difference they are not suitable for many tasks. We can see in our world they are also work with men and they are capable any kind of work that a men can do.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'enabled'.
Suggestion: enabled
...other would state that both of them are enable to work side by side that means there i...
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Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...on based on there gander. Secondly. in every profession like doctor, engineer,...
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Line 7, column 350, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun task seems to be countable; consider using: 'many tasks'.
Suggestion: many tasks
...cal difference women are not suited for many task. Although participation of men and w...
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Line 9, column 187, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...job. Sometimes some conservative family dont want there daughter work outside the ho...
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Line 9, column 256, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... outside the home, there husband may be dont like that his wife work outside home. B...
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Line 11, column 222, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a man' or simply 'men'?
Suggestion: a man; men
... they are capable any kind of work that a men can do.
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Line 11, column 224, Rule ID: MAN_MEN[1]
Message: 'man' is the singular form of 'men'. Consider using 'man'?
Suggestion: man
...hey are capable any kind of work that a men can do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, kind of, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 369.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78590785908 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40845339639 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455284552846 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.0795163162 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9473684211 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4210526316 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68421052632 5.21951772744 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429788147649 0.243740707755 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145556470935 0.0831039109588 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12676322282 0.0758088955206 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259732420824 0.150359130593 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102255753676 0.0667264976115 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.