In many countries today, major cities have become too big and overcrowded.
Why is this?
What measures could be taken to reduce this problem?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In recent years, there are many cities in the world have become overcrowded because of rapidly populations growth. In this essay, I am going to examine the reasons why this problem causes and the measures to overcome it.
Thanks to modern technologies, scientific, nowadays, have carried out many experiments in order to help people stay healthy and make life-expectancy longer. this helps the elderly people live in the lengthy life meanwhile the rate of populations is still rising causing the overpopulation in the big cities. moreover, people believe that they are able to find a better job when living in a city. this is because of in rural areas, they are facing a shortage of facilities to let them acquire the knowledge and jobs, therefore, moving to urban areas is one of the major reasons to allow individuals to enhance their life. Besides looking for the opportunities, clean water, entertainment, transportations, and so on are easily accessible in a megacity than in a small town.
The reasons I have given above are causing overcrowded in the major cities, therefore, I think both governments and individuals have a duty to find ways to overcome this problem. In term of solutions, I believe that governments hold responsibility for tackling difficulties. Firstly, it is crucial that the authorities should provide modern facilities for all its citizens. Secondly, appealing foreign investments into regional and mountainous areas to gain more chances for dwellers to get a job. For instance, Vietnam’s government succeeded in inviting the foreign capitals in Ninh Binh province to give the poor a hand to have a job in order to pay-off their everything needs.
Naturally, individuals should also try to address these problems. they should assist the citizens living in a rural area to have fresh water to use, for example, drill a well-water, build a leisure center, or call upon city-teachers to come and teach students in there. moreover, individuals should put pressure on governments to impose their processes rapidly to solve all the problems.
In conclusion, it is clear that major cities have become too big and overcrowded because of some reasons I mentioned above. The measures I gave are some examples for people and authorities to follow and help this world better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1968.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26203208556 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03778148187 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7805213898 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.764705882 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41176470588 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222686016648 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690620615405 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636264063424 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142603356171 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078012566453 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.