Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles.
Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In our hustle life, people have been spending much time working each day, thus, the free time has become very essential. There exist numerous ways to reasonably use free time. Some people believed that it is essential to spend time on pastimes which enhance the mind, namely reading and doing word puzzles, while others thought that it is vital to let the brain rest in the free time. In my opinion, I agree partly with both viewpoints.
One the one hand, it is understandable leisure pursuits that help enhance brains are exceptionally essential. The key rationale in favor of this view is the focus ability of human is kept remaining and evolved by the aforementioned pastimes. For example, when you are playing a word puzzle game such as finding words, you have to pay the attention to each letter to find keywords. In addition, reading books which is a wonderful choice for leisure activities also is one of the best ways to broaden the reader’s knowledge. Therefore, the dead time will not be existed, since people use free time for useful activities to enhance themselves.
On the other hand, I still believe that our brains are needed to get a rest in free time. It is undeniable that the stress will emerge if the worker keeps doing in a long time with huge pressure. In addition, after a stressful day, it is counter-productive if people spend time on pastimes such as reading and playing puzzles since their brains are overloaded. Therefore, people might be weakened without the rest of their brains. For instance, after a busy day, the only thing that I always want to do is going to bed to refresh myself.
In conclusion, a justifiable schedule is the best way for people to have free time for both enhancing mind pastimes and the rest for brains.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74675324675 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67017377042 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525974025974 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2025980366 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333539023121 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106480359914 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742335675169 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214341904101 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348103800016 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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