overpopulation in the urban areas has led to generate many problems. write out one or two serious problems and give the suggestions to tackle out by the individual and government.
The growing requirements and for having a lavish lifestyle make people move the urban areas. The facilities are available at metros and capital of the states going at the highest stage, where everything gets easier to reach, adapt, and use. The major challenge occurs when the population increases<span class="hiddenSpellError" pre="increases "></span> day by day simultaneously and the space of living on specific demography decreases. The overpopulation in any city has created many problems for the public as well for the government in the maintaining of the livelihood of nation and citizens.
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There are many issues included <span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="issues "></span>with the overpopulation, but the foremost and severe common trouble faced by the public and regime is the traffic over the roads. The biggest hardship is sustaining the overload of vehicles and defending the rules of traffic to overcome the accidents. Secondly, another issue is a high rate of unemployment and competition in the different sectors of jobs. This two are the most crucial effect confronted by any of the people who exist in the urban locality.
For minimizing the impact of this challenge, the government has to take strict action for the people who do not follow the traffic rules and charge a disciplinary amount of fine, and by punishing them they recognize their fault and<span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="and "></span> unable to repeat those mistakes again. In addition, people join the workshops provided by the police department to take guidance for acquiring the necessary skills of driving in the traffic. Lastly, for removing the unemployment both the parties keep harmony together, so they can find out the solutions and create more jobs for the different level and backgrounds of people.
In conclusion, I would like to suggest that the public needs to get aware<span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="needs "></span> of their own happenings. This requires the self-assessment and self-discipline for controlling the habits to make sure that, everyone is responsible for working towards the development of the nation not for creating problems for the country. On the other hand, the government necessarily give equal opportunities for everyone to create a serene and healthy environment in society and not unnecessary competition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...g gets easier to reach, adapt, and use. The major challenge occurs when the populat...
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Line 1, column 458, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...iving on specific demography decreases. The overpopulation in any city has created ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, as to, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2119.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90250696379 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.91001103331 2.80592935109 175% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58217270195 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.6822181453 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.357142857 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6428571429 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0499098819425 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0225215615822 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270161521094 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0286618325429 0.151304729494 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016848356376 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.24 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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