overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved.
Every day, people are attracted to cities because of the facilities and the opportunities available in them. Some take permanent residence and others come and go daily. Overpopulation is a major problem that mega-cities and cities currently facing. In order to provide solutions, first we need to find the causes of these issue.
The most important reason for overpopulation is the facilities available in these urban centers. There are better services like education, health, transportation and security available in these cities compares to rural/remote areas. Hence people are attracted to the cities. Secondly, there are more opportunities in the cities than any other places to become success in the life. This can be either occupational or businesswise. Thirdly, it is human nature for people to work and live in groups. No one does not want to live alone even at the stone age. Therefore people are attracted to the urban centers.
There are many solutions for the overpopulation issue in the cities. Firstly, the government should make immediate action to provide and improve infrastructure and facilities in the rural areas. Education, health and transportation are the main fields. Secondly, there should be a mechanism that encourages the major companies to start or move their offices to regional areas. Introducing industrial zones with attractive tax rates and other facilities would be a great option. Thirdly, the government should implement a program to develop the local industries/businesses relevant to particular areas. It can be diary in one area, wood work in another and mining in some other area. Developing and boosting the local industries and business will be able to retain the local people in the local area and stop going to other places looking for more opportunities.
In conclusion, the overpopulation is a major issue in urban centers. There are many reasons for this and in order to overcome it, the government and local authorities need to implement solid mechanism with short-term and long-term plans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33024691358 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11522820615 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503086419753 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2321286654 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7272727273 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31818181818 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174577729973 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515124240417 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682476837985 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110409856562 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319701234922 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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