TOPIC # 41 Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view?
I wonder how much human being can be complacent and cruel toward other creatures. I strongly disagree with this point of view. I feel this way because the earth does not only belong to us, the balance of ecosystem is crucial for everyone, and we can simply manage to use our available sources efficiently without violating the environment.
First, every living thing on this planet has the right to live peacefully, and human should respect this fact. Having some advantages such as the virtue of wisdom does not authorize man to disturb the environment, and wreck the other animals’ natural habi...
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- TOPIC # 44 Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? 80
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