A hundred years ago, people thought that human race was steadily improving in every area of life. Now it seems this is not certain in that situation. In which areas do you think we have made important progress nowadays, and in which area do you think we still need to make progress.
It is an irrefutable fact that , a lot of development has observed in the present days and this credit goes to advance technology because there is a massive transformation found in these days in comparison to the past. So this essay shall analyse the some fields where development has been found as well as some areas which still need to make progress.
Considering the various fields, medical fields are also upgrading by the latest technology which is remunerative for the health of the masses because there is many treatments has found which can treated immediately for an instance as, cancer disease. Not only this, there is more and more medical stores are available for the public as they can easy to get the alternative medicines. Further, the surgical treatments are also developed so it is easy to transplant organs such as, kidney transplant and heart transplant.
In addition to this, there are other transformation are also observed in the society like as transportation facility and this is the major transformation among the nation because these days there are different types of transport systems are available for the people like as automated vehicle which is very comfortable and convenient so they can go anywhere without any delay. While airplane transport system is also the fastest means of transport for the international travelling within hours. Furthermore, communication also enrich by the latest technology so the people use this progress to connect with their near and dear ones, once like as internet is the most famous means of communication system.
On the other hand, there are some domains where still need to make progress. First of all, scientific researches are the main progress of the present scenario so it would be better for the country to make a new reasearch techniques like as explore the outer space which helps to unfold the mystery of the earth. Moreover, scientist should search the new way to degrade the global warming in the society.
Overall, technology is spreading its wings from pillar to past even the field of every sector. So also the overall development needed to enhance the growth of the nation by the mutual efforts of the society as well as government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, well, while, in addition, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04891304348 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80290964276 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516304347826 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.2295308763 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.923076923 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3076923077 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0885981284793 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0302839074884 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330372500024 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0478583875759 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246335884794 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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