Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didnot write each.
Dear maria and Susan,
How are you? Hope you are doing well. I am fine and my daughter is doing good. I received the photos that we took on our Ooty holidays. Albeit, as we enjoyed our days there, photos bring the original feeling on those happier days and cool climate there. Also, I am extremely delighted on seeing daughter portrait photos and those candid photos taken in boating.
I really appreciate both of your efforts for arranging our stay comfortable at your home, daily trips outside and especially your guidance to tour to places that is not often visited by tourist and most welcoming and away from traffic during peak season. Especially, you both spent most of your time with us to make my daughter feel comfortable by going to wax museum and moving to home when parents felt tired.
As you are aware, I was quite occupied at work and busy in completing tasks in project deadline, hence i was unable to respond to your holiday photos mail immediately. I hope you both would consider my apologies for not responding on time. Thanks for the photos shared with all memories in tact and to reminisce our days spent in your home.
Please plan to visit Chennai when you are in Annual holidays.
Hope to meet soon and warm wishes.
Cheers
Sajita
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...leting tasks in project deadline, hence i was unable to respond to your holiday p...
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Line 7, column 288, Rule ID: IN_TACT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'intact'?
Suggestion: intact
...for the photos shared with all memories in tact and to reminisce our days spent in your...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70403587444 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32521480761 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618834080717 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0271528844 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6923076923 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27763615129 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846469268442 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593290635387 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107600052061 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944089475008 0.0580467560999 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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