People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The issue that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college is an intresting one. Indisputably, it is require to study the same curriculum till they enter college. Nevertheless, students should have study the same national curriculum its good for students. Hence, I agree with the statement that nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
However, There are many good reasons for,which make you think in favor of that nation should required a good students. To illustrate, Let us look at the example of if students was learn every subjects in his school. then they will select their path or field or intrested area.
Furthermore, A nation should required a good students. because if students learn all about national curriculum until they enter college then they will make a correct path. Hence,There should be possible that if all students to do study national curriculum within their school time that is good for students and also our nation.
Admittedly, There are also benifits are available on the other side. However, The above statement is especially true when it comes to this situation that is students are learn one interested subject and then they will go ahed with their field. it is easy for them in some situations. To additional, However , It might be possible that students have only one field knowladge. Because, students are learn only one field.
In short, Although, we can agree with the statement that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
... an intresting one. Indisputably, it is require to study the same curriculum till they ...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'studying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: studying
...esting one. Indisputably, it is require to study the same curriculum till they enter col...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...However, There are many good reasons for,which make you think in favor of that nation ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'student'?
Suggestion: student
...r of that nation should required a good students. To illustrate, Let us look at the exam...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
... look at the example of if students was learn every subjects in his school. then they...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Then
...was learn every subjects in his school. then they will select their path or field or...
^^^^
Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'student'?
Suggestion: student
...ermore, A nation should required a good students. because if students learn all about na...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...nation should required a good students. because if students learn all about national cu...
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Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nation should required a good students. because if students learn all about national cu...
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Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , There
...hen they will make a correct path. Hence,There should be possible that if all students...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 171, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
... to this situation that is students are learn one interested subject and then they wi...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 245, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...hen they will go ahed with their field. it is easy for them in some situations. To...
^^
Line 7, column 307, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... some situations. To additional, However , It might be possible that students have...
^^
Line 7, column 376, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...students have only one field knowladge. Because, students are learn only one field. ...
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Line 7, column 398, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
... field knowladge. Because, students are learn only one field. In short, Although, ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, then, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 275.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06545454545 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59107120097 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 215.323595506 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443636363636 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6669057204 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0625 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0639898607519 0.243740707755 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0271766043813 0.0831039109588 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400388833278 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0501297903776 0.150359130593 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274831431593 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 8.38706741573 79% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 100.480337079 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.