You have not received the prize which you have won at a newspaper.
Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper with below details:
- Details of how you won the prize
- What is the prize given to you
- What action you expect to be taken
Dear Sir/ Madam
I am writing this letter to express my sheer disappointment regarding the opportunity you advert in newspaper to write an article on history of 15th and 16th centuries era and our ancestors life on Daily times.
I am quite sure that I have submitted my article before due time expressing the life of Kings and Queens, their Emperor, assisnation ,execution, confronting and buturing common people, their winning battles against strongest armors, corpses pilled on battlefield ad much more about their sacrifices. For this blog I achieved number one position amongst 50 contestants and received an email confirming my prize.
Howerver I never actually received my prize which includes 50,000 cash, 4 day vacation and return ticket from Dubai as well as my picture with my blog in your newspaper on front page. which was annoying as I had my hopes up and told all my friends.
I suppose I can give you one week to rectify things and give me what I deserved otherwise I will write one more article about your negligence and false deceptions you made.
i hope to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully
Sabrina
- You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter, » explain why you were at the restaurant » describe the problems » 89
- Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 56
- In general people do not have such a close relationship with their neighbors as they did in the past. Why is this so, and what can be done to improve contact between neighbors? 56
- Nowadays many people choose ready made food and refuse to cook at home. Why do you think it happens? What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a choice? 11
- Developments of technology are causing environmental problems. Some people think the solution is that everyone should accept a simpler life, while other believe that technology can solve these problems. Discuss both view and give your opinion 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/ Madam I am writing this letter to express my s...
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Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'centuries'' or 'century's'?
Suggestion: centuries'; century's
... an article on history of 15th and 16th centuries era and our ancestors life on Daily tim...
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Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s and Queens, their Emperor, assisnation ,execution, confronting and buturing comm...
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Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'against the strongest'.
Suggestion: against the strongest
...ng common people, their winning battles against strongest armors, corpses pilled on battlefield a...
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Line 7, column 185, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...y blog in your newspaper on front page. which was annoying as I had my hopes up and t...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...ence and false deceptions you made. i hope to hear from you soon. Yours f...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ence and false deceptions you made. i hope to hear from you soon. Yours f...
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Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hear from you soon. Yours faithfully Sabrina
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, regarding, so, well, i suppose, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97382198953 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69959138501 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.69109947644 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.4820928613 44.8134815571 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 118.75 76.5299724578 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 4.34317383033 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184944364446 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076137048171 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592254013156 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109466918557 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464520404944 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 8.37731958763 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.