News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more often effective than words. What is your opinion about this?
According to some people, pictures describe any event more sophisticatedly than the words do. so either it’s a print media or news channel, they also broadcast most of the news with a pictorial presentation. I also think that pictures bring about more understanding of the news that has been shown.
To start with, videos and images are the best way to make the audience attract to the news. they make people read the story which from a headline, seems uninterested to them. For example, whenever I read a newspaper I always first unintentionally go through the news shown with the picture as I do not have to read the whole content. Moreover, images help people understanding the news properly as sometimes the written text in newspaper or headline in the TV is too much small to read by a person having weak eyesight, so they can interpret whatever they are watching with the help of that picture.
however, on the flip side, sometimes showing image can have a negative impact on the individuals especially children. To elaborate, images from a crime scene or any violent content in the video can leave people in stress and depression. also, children can copy any negativity from that and can apply to their peers as a part of playing. For instance, once a criminal was strangled to death, the media was allowed to show images of the scene. After a few days, I got to hear from my neighborhood that their child attempted to do the same with his younger brother. so sometimes such images can lead to some fatal consequences.
In conclusion, images are the most convenient way for readers or viewers to perceive the news. however, children’s concentration should be deteriorated, when any violent content is being shown.
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| 2019-05-26 | harisvohra | 61 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87837837838 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87005521666 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4887531887 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121865680921 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449240275644 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457188614382 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0793100608986 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644023900514 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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