You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.
You should write at least 250 words.
I do not agree with the statement that businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. I state my opinion on the following points.
First of all, every company must have its moral code. It means that a company should treat its clients properly and respect their rights. Of cause a company may lose a part of its profit but security of its clients must be on the first place. Otherwise, clients will switch to another company and never be back. For instance, a few years ago "Jonson&Jonson" produced a new type of painkillers. Unfortunately, this product was not tested properly. As a resul...
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Attribute Value Ideal
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Category: Very Good Excellent
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