Essay topics:
You recently had your computer fixed at the local computer store however you are not pleased with the service you received. Write a letter to the store manager. In the letter- describe the situation- explain why you are dissatisfied- say what you want them
Dear Sir,
I am a loyal patron of your chain tech shop since its inception in the 2000s. However, unfortunately, I am writing this letter to express my utter dissatisfaction regarding the maintenance service of my personal computer that I delivered yesterday. Please allow me to explain the situation.
To begin with, as I purchased my laptop 6 months ago, it still has a warranty for the next full year. As because, I have encountered a few difficulties with slowed start-up coupled with disabled antivirus which has been given free during procurement. To fix the problems, I gave it to your Basundhara branch last Saturday.
Regrettably, instead of resolving the existing issues it has come up with new complications like frequent automatic restart about every twenty minutes. To make the matter worse, some inevitable programs as the "Microsoft Office" is uninstalled. As a consequence, I missed the deadline to prepare my committed official assignments last week and severely threatening my upcoming urgent projects to get on time.
In this circumstance, I would really appreciate if you arrange a similar machine temporarily and solve my one as early as possible.
Yours sincerely
A T M Jakir Alam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours sincerely A T M Jakir Alam
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, regarding, so, still, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34693877551 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27387269132 2.54303337028 129% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.739795918367 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8520064137 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2727272727 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126824650986 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404212633245 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330072094503 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666363785404 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390493547246 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 8.71597938144 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.