When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree
The situation in employment get changed<span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="employment "></span> since companies look over to the other benefits given to the employees. Choosing the right job sincerely have involved so many things to consider but some people argued that the only consideration for going to any job is looking for the salary offered by the employer. In my opinion, I totally disagree with this statement because today the factor of salary mostly taken as a secondary thing, primary things includes a lot of classification to chose <span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="which "></span>before getting into a job.
In one hand, the people who negotiate the salaries can have good incomes and base payments monthly. They feel secure in terms of getting a protective amount of money so they could make savings and spent it on other investments while maintaining prosperous life. In this instance, the job seekers forget the other internal things to consider who let them feel happy internally and socially interacted towards different groups. The other advantages ignored by them that's why many employees have a feeling of dissatisfaction and lack of focus into the work environment.
On the other hand, people nowadays have some purpose to choose that significant job. The job they want to do be more creative and putting subsequent resources for their career growth as well. Generally, the businesses provide enough information on the job letter about the rules and regulations of their company, bonuses, health benefits, medical insurance, vacations, and overtime paid hours. After considering all of this still employees have different requirements on the basis of their needs, such as the different groups of departments organize monthly get together and parties during weekdays to enjoy and spend quality life with colleagues. Moreover, the better working environment, freedom, flexible working hours, training and workshops provided by the companies also comes along with these factors. Additionally, the latest trend occurs in this sector to support those employees who want to pursue further courses which bring them skills and productivity by giving them loans and scholarships.
In conclusion, I would argue that the circumstances and the necessity of public have drastically moved to another level. The demands in terms of internal satisfaction increases and external requirements seem declined. The employees need to know about everything before joining any job so they do not feel stressed and unhappy with their work life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, second, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2207.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63010204082 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.7709009026 2.80592935109 134% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609693877551 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 666.0 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4836199582 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.9375 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105895576493 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345925259688 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407324686871 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0591513009921 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024028471012 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.