limitations of Internet
In fact, the roles of the internet are very important. internet helps us a lot of improving ourselves, espeacially students. Besides, internet also gets many limitation. Firstly, using internet is time consuming. students can spend too much time playing computer games. Secondly, using internet can be negative on their study. students just focus on computer games so they spend less time discovering the whole world. their knowledge can be limited. thirdly, internet also affects students social skills. they do not communicate with each others and do not make new friends. Finally, internet affects seriously to students health. if it take them too much time to play games, they can be myopia or metal disorders. in conclusion, internet should be limited to students.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Internet
...les of the internet are very important. internet helps us a lot of improving ourselves, ...
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Line 1, column 154, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun limitation seems to be countable; consider using: 'many limitations'.
Suggestion: many limitations
...y students. Besides, internet also gets many limitation. Firstly, using internet is time consum...
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Line 1, column 214, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Students
...stly, using internet is time consuming. students can spend too much time playing compute...
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Line 1, column 328, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Students
...nternet can be negative on their study. students just focus on computer games so they sp...
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Line 1, column 419, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Their
... less time discovering the whole world. their knowledge can be limited. thirdly, inte...
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Line 1, column 451, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thirdly
... world. their knowledge can be limited. thirdly, internet also affects students social ...
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Line 1, column 506, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...et also affects students social skills. they do not communicate with each others and...
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Line 1, column 632, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...t affects seriously to students health. if it take them too much time to play game...
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Line 1, column 638, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
...cts seriously to students health. if it take them too much time to play games, they ...
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Line 1, column 716, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
... they can be myopia or metal disorders. in conclusion, internet should be limited ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 41.998997996 24% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 650.0 1615.20841683 40% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 122.0 315.596192385 39% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32786885246 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.32345618554 4.20363070211 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67373983559 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 176.041082164 47% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680327868852 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 506.74238477 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 9.0 20.2975951904 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 15.5323674264 49.4020404114 31% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 50.0 106.682146367 47% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.38461538462 20.7667163134 45% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31787776472 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12711269027 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124266336022 0.0667982634062 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31787776472 0.151304729494 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.34 50.2224549098 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.86 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 9.78957915832 36% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 10.1190380762 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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