In today time, the store has increased its opening hours. Some people say that it is a negative development. Discuss, your point of view that whether it is a positive or negative development for shop owners and community.
Lifestyle has undergone a drastic change in the last few decades, therefore the change in lifestyles also leads to the various changes in people daily routine. In todays time, the opening hour of stores showed a drastic change. This essay intend to discuss whether this trend is a positive or negative development, but according to me, positive points may overlay negative ones.
There are a plethora of point which perfectly stand with a positive side, one may go on to the list. First and foremost, if a store has longer opening hours than they are also accessible to those masses who come very late to their houses after their hectic schedules. For instance, they can buy anything easily after their working hours without having any kind of worries about their daily needs. Secondly, this may also play a vital role in country development. Further emphasizing on my point of view, if the shops are open for longer hours then it tends the shopkeeper to earn more means and he will have to pay more taxes to the government, which assists the increase of country development.
On the other hand, it is a negative development because it will make crowd lazy toward their daily work and led them to delay their daily buying from the shops, which may decrease their living standards and bad health conditions. For instance, if a person become slothful toward their work then he/she may not be able to achieve his/her ambitious goals, which may led to their insecure future. Moreover, opening bodega for longers hours may also lead to mediocre of shop owners and also add a hefty sum of money in managing their shop security.
In conclusion, it is well said that every coin has to face, therefore opening corner also has both faces. So, the government should manage a healthy balance between shop opening hours and people working hours, therefore people get easy access to stores and do not have to go in the hustle bustle for their basic needs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8125 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36879148831 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577380952381 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.9268782177 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.384615385 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8461538462 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0769230769 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236644285759 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850906658059 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713113296096 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147825723012 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585106218509 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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