Ques - You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
● explain why you changed jobs ● describe your new job ● tell him/her your other news.
Dear Annie,
Hope this letter finds you in good health. I'm writing this letter to let you know that I've left my previous job and joined a multi-national company, Genpact in Delhi NCR.
As you are aware that I've completed masters in Analysis with first division, I changed the job to get hands on practice on analytical skills. The previous job was paying me good amount of money, but I was not getting much learning opportunities. And our building was shifted to new location that was too far from my home and my time was getting wasted in travelling.
You will be glad to know that my new job is giving me a lot of chances to do real time practice on new tools and techniques. Here we are working on forecasting model to predict the number of customer service agents, that will be required to receive client calls at a particular time. It is really interesting work and I am enjoying learning new things.
I’m planning to visit your city in last week of next month to attend my cousin’s marriage. If I’m remembering it right, your birthday is also in that week. I will definitely take out some time to meet you, we will call our school gang as well to celebrate your birthday.
See you soon,
With Love,
Gunjan
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-05-29 | Gunjan Bhatia | 73 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...e this letter finds you in good health. Im writing this letter to let you know tha...
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Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...riting this letter to let you know that Ive left my previous job and joined a multi...
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Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
... in Delhi NCR. As you are aware that Ive completed masters in Analysis with firs...
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Line 8, column 128, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rights'?
Suggestion: rights
...;s marriage. If I'm remembering it right, your birthday is also in that week. I ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, well, as to, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61711711712 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59373812816 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630630630631 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3466955866 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4166666667 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245800493536 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849907267597 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428963187919 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133904393024 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377167630429 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.