We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospital, crime detection and even to fly planes.what things will they be used in the future? In this dependent on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?
Today, the computer has become an indispensable tool in our day-to-day activities. In fact,we find it very difficult to get through a working day without it. In this essay, I will discuss the usage of computer in the foreseeable future, Also I will analysis how this dependency will have negative impact on the society.
To begin with, computer can be used in performing daily works at the house. For an instance, cleaning of the home can be done with the minimum effort and time with the advent of robot maids. In addition, teacher can use computer for teaching their students by staying at their own place. In other words, tutor can arrange multiple classes in different cities at the same time by the help of this tool. Thus, it is obvious that the computer can be used in household work as well as for teaching purpose the upcoming days.
However, inordinate usage of this equipment has many disadvantages. First of all, human being will be replaced by this machine leading to the increment in the unemployment which is intrinsically tied to the rate of the crime within the nation. Furthermore,the absence of physical presence of teachers in the classroom can raise problem of discipline within the students. In other words, social development of these puppies will be harmed and thereby, will cause a hindrance in the nation's social growth.
From above,it can be seen that computer will be used for various activities at home as well as at education institutions in the future. But, excessive utilisation of this machine can boost the issues related to job causing rise in the crime and afflict the young people's development. It is thus hope that people will be made aware of the harmfulness of relying too much on computers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, well, as for, in addition, in fact, as well as, first of all, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88175675676 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73956075228 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574324324324 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4610164419 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213782399778 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722091696575 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507107980649 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130025094536 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169085168103 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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