Due to so many young people dropping out of school, the rate of unemployment is going up and it affects our society in different ways. In your opinion, how can this situation be improved?
It is irrefutable that students are losing their interest in studies and become school dropouts. Hence, jobless youth is increasing and impacting society adversely. Various tasks and homework are required to overcome this problem like training of out-school youths, engagement with professional activities and more importantly looking for the opportunity of readmission of disarrayed youth.
Firstly, the government should take a stand and trained these juveniles about the need for society and how pivotal is personal development. Awareness sessions in between communities and focus on active learning with the right path among youngsters. In addition to that, the government can support free courses to the disturbed youth about the need for their career and growth for the betterment of the nation and for themselves.
Secondly, a various organization can take a step ahead by allowing such individuals to work for the organization with little cost of training from clerical job to technical handy work. In return, the paid amount as a salary will improve their living style and keep them on track as well as encourage them to be more competent and professional in their career.
Finally, the re-admission to the school is the best way to improve the quality of youth. In which pupils will be provided with another chance to make their career with the utmost care, thus resulting in it into more successful, properly trained and intellectual.
In summary, the rise in the school dropout impacts badly to the nation in many ways. Therefore, training and persuading such kids to go for schooling or join the professional network are a good way to minimize the unemployment rate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, hence, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition, in summary, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26666666667 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87542923378 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588888888889 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5084787754 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131489483041 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498111941528 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345918958911 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761238532825 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441028556389 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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