Although more and more people read the news on internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree?
People are getting information through lot of sources. A recent decade are witness of development in everyone's life. Amid this development, there is one phenomenon, that has associated with it according to this phenomenon, reading the news on internet become more famous track while other believe that there is not changes wanted in source of newspaper. I will try to throw light up on the prons of both sources to read current affairs. Also, I will try posit my perspective about it.
To commence with, there are multifarious reason to shore those people who are in favor of reading news online is the best way. First and foremost, readers has been accessed the internet to read the news online as well as they can check it everywhere when they want. To justify, people even read the headlines through their smart phone without having any particular device. Secondly, younger generation find it easier and cheaper than newspaper. Thus, they can save the money as well. Furthermore, there has been few result for people to divert from newspaper to e-news as it is eco-friendly for atmosphere as well as it mitigate the action of cutting trees to produce paper and ink for newspaper.
On the other side of spectrum, there are several reason to endorse that people who are more likely to use traditional way of newspaper. The predominant reason is that senior citizens find it difficult to run such device like smart phone and PC. Hence, they have not any intense to change that mode of news. The another reason for it is that online news reading app sometime distract the people from harsh advertisement. Afterwards, spent more time to read news online is affect the health of people explicitly. For instance, it lead weakened the eye sight of people if they expanse longer time on smart phone. Last but not the least, people have great advantages of newspaper is they would have increased efficiency of great reading, as pupils have textbook and they can read it quickly and conveniently.
Aggelomerating, all the points I elaborated it can be concluded that newspaper has more benefits for senior citizens or students for enhancing their reading abilities or spent their time. While online news has enormous merits that it is environmental friendly thereby, it is more fruitful in my opinion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun result seems to be countable; consider using: 'few results'.
Suggestion: few results
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...n the other side of spectrum, there are several reason to endorse that people who are more lik...
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Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
... of people explicitly. For instance, it lead weakened the eye sight of people if the...
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Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for instance, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1916.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95090439276 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66497853343 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529715762274 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0285380507 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.35 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302388086698 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860812554914 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627259646644 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190410856928 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00788250388569 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.