When international media (including movies, fashion shows, advertisements and other TV programmes) convey the same messages to the global audience, people argue that the expansion of international media has negative impacts on cultural diversity. What is your opinion?
Nowadays, as international media companies expand across the world, the growing popularity and uniformity of some media programmes (TV shows, movies, fashion shows) is resulting in worldwide concern. many people have strong view toward this trend. To an extend, i agree globalisation through media has many advantages. However, it inevitably poses a threat to cultural diversity.
On the one hand, the domination of international media is a good carrier of knowledge and information. it brings people opportunity to get a deeper comprehension of cultures and diverse lifestyle. They can exchange languages and habits of different cultures, and easily understand each other. As a result, it helps people from all over the world be able to get closer, reducing the prejudice among nations. Besides, mass media also helps in countries development, whenever a country mimics successful plans of other countries, like the United European organisation where the countries involved in this organisation exchange news of flourishment and high achievements.
On the other hand, that international media deliver the same messages to civilians has potential to thwart cultural diversity. As a matter of fact, people are having tendency to imitate the lifestyles of other cultures. For example, young people, especially teenagers wear the dresses and customs of the famous stars appearing in the programmes. this trend makes people seemingly become the same and ultimately lose the cultural erosion of a country. In addition to that, international media is owned by giant corporations which control large sectors of the media market and force national media companies go to the wall. this, thus, causes a proportional reduction in the variety of programmes broadcasted, degrading the country’s economy.
In conclusion ,media has double-edged impacts on the society (while it profoundly enhances people’s knowledge, its detrimental impacts on the community are thought-provoking). From my perspective, people should not go in deep with it but entertain it within the limit to avoid its drawbacks.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60883280757 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21522143824 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630914826498 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8090718967 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.588235294 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338583949924 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934900158269 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864321483003 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189770714703 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788245831016 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.