You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment
In your letter
-describe the problem with the equipment
-explain how this problem is affecting your work
-say what you want the company or shop to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about a printer I recently purchased from your shop.
I bought an HP printer with model number GLK10398, from your downtown branch on 15th June. I was extremely disappointed by the product as it never worked properly. Firstly, after printing a paper, it shows an error message and after that, it shuts down. In addition, printed papers are of very low quality as words are not readable.
I am a writer working from home. In my line of profession requires a lot of printouts which I use to do the editing and reading. But now I am not able to continue my work and meet the deadlines as I am crippled by the printer.
I request immediate action on this complain. It is in warranty so I prefer it to be replaced with a new working printer of the same model.
I look forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Ahsan Abid.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...from your downtown branch on 15th June. I was extremely disappointed by the produ...
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Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ion requires a lot of printouts which I use to do the editing and reading. But now ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 722.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5125 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58650343128 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66875 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3079150105 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.1666666667 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154064387057 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559021721141 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324700482258 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794790474206 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0112472606444 0.0580467560999 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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