Fossil fuel is the main source of energy. In some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy is encouraged. To what extent do you think is it a positive or negative development?
Although fossil fuel is the major source of energy, governments all over the world are finding for other sustainable alternative sources of energy. In my opinion, this trend is completely a progress for a variety of reasons.
Firstly, producing energy from buried dead organisms lack sustainability since it cannot guarantee the survival of human in the long term. In fact, the consumption of fossil fuel accelerates in direct correlation with a significant growth of the population of every country. Moreover, with the current rate of exploitation, this kind of valuable source of energy would soon dwindle away. Therefore, other alternative sources of energy will be likely to decline energy scarcity and ensure the future development of human race.
Secondly, using fossil fuel result in environmental degradation in comparison with renewable sources of energy such as solar power, wind power. To be more specific, the combustion of energy from buries dead organisms plays a vital part in global warming, which may exert devastating effect to the atmosphere of this planet in the future. Such suffering of the Earth cannot be justified as human’s increasing needs for energy. On the contrary, this would not be the case if authorities know to invest greater amount of money on exploiting alternative sources of energy, there will be an unlimited amount of inexpensive energy on the long run.
In conclusion, because of scarcity of energy from buries dead organisms, not only authorities but also individual people should try their best to find for other alternative energy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'progress'.
Suggestion: progress
...In my opinion, this trend is completely a progress for a variety of reasons. Firstly, pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32270916335 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93336957592 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585657370518 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5919267169 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.454545455 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7272727273 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250482447955 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967037181832 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07997665208 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156155409153 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500925152678 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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