Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown are or out of season. Some people think this is a positive development, but others believe the use of air transport for this purpose is not justified. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
There has been increasing in the demand of import throughout the world in recent years, including those perishable item such as fruits and vegetables. Some faction of people argue that it is beneficial for those country who are impoverished in agriculture products while it has some negative aspect that it is unnecessary. I will try to throw light upon both views with contain their perception. Also, I will try to posit my view about it.
To commence with, there are multifarious evidence to shore those people who are in favor of it is the best way to import the crop from another countries. First and foremost, the conspicuous advantage is people get aware from foreign fruit and vegetable. To justify, crops from one countries has been imported to another countries. Since, people who are rely on only domestic products, they are more likely to taste another exotic fruits and vegetable that are fueled with enough vitamin and nutrients. The another predominant reason that scanty of food has been decreased due to imported agricultural products. To explain, people who can not be able to grow up the crops because of the bad climate or scarcity of water then it led to provide adequate crops which are not produced by pesticides.
On the other side of spectrum, there are several advocate to oppose this perspective. From the my side, firstly, people have to face the inflation due to import. In addition, government try to cater all the necessity such as fruits and vegetable by purchasing that product from other countries which are transferred by air travels due to this mode of transport, price of oil would be reached at peck as well as the cost of product explicitly available at high price. Hence, people might be struggle with this problem as they have vegetable or fruit shortage. Apart from this perception, people are opposed with this idea which lead to decrease in usage of domestic product and dwellers of imported countries divert their mentality to foreign food that they are rich with all nutrients.
Aggelomerating, all the points I elaborated an above that can be concluded that transport through air travels is beneficial as they fulfilled the requirement in just a few days despite having benefits it has negative aspect likewise people consume that fruits and vegetable which incline towards the decline in cultivating the crops. That is why I support that both view has positive as well as negative effects. Thereby, it is more fruitful in my opinion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one country', 'a country', or simply 'countries'?
Suggestion: one country; a country; countries
...t and vegetable. To justify, crops from one countries has been imported to another countries....
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Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ted to another countries. Since, people who are rely on only domestic products, they ar...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'relied'.
Suggestion: relied
...nother countries. Since, people who are rely on only domestic products, they are mor...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advocate seems to be countable; consider using: 'several advocates'.
Suggestion: several advocates
...n the other side of spectrum, there are several advocate to oppose this perspective. From the my...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'advocates'?
Suggestion: advocates
...her side of spectrum, there are several advocate to oppose this perspective. From the my...
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Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'my'?
Suggestion: the; my
...vocate to oppose this perspective. From the my side, firstly, people have to face the ...
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...y I support that both view has positive as well as negative effects. Thereby, it is more f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, likewise, so, then, well, while, apart from, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2073.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 417.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97122302158 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68605900191 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517985611511 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 656.1 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.328551772 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.166666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94444444444 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230694802141 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667590351452 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553167135471 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135113545071 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617455134168 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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