TOPIC # 45 Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day’s work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night?
There is an old saying in English that the early bird catches the worm. However, depending on the inheritance or some earned habits, some people naturally function more effectively during nights. Unlike them, I personally work better by day, and I love to get up at dawn and start my job as soon as possible on the following grounds;
First, I feel more energetic and productive when I get up early. There is something strange about the morning’s air that refreshes me and makes me feel more alive. Meanwhile, early in the morning, I am more focused on my job no matter what kind of job it is, an...
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The introduction is just
The introduction is just great!
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Score: 27 in 30
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I doubt whether the saying in the introduction suits the whole essay or not?!
Thanks again for your help and hard work