Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace.
Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
With the advancement in the internet and software allow us to work from home or any remote place. Although some people believe this change as negative growth for society and work culture, the benefits are far more superior for companies and employees as well. I strongly agree with this notion and will explain my views in further paragraphs.
Earlier, for any official work, people had to be present in their office because of technological limitations such as poor internet connectivity, software access, and inadequate hardware. For instance, to resolve an issue on client site, company needed to deploy two employees, one at client location and another at base office location. Because of seamless internet connection and new invention of software, service provider can resolve a technical issue by talking remote access to the client laptops and PCs. Is it not a win-win situation for both parties – time-saving and prompt service? Moreover, work from home is possible because of improvement in information technology as we need only one laptop and internet to communicate with our client and project members. As this culture – work from home – is beneficial for both employee and employers, many organisations are promoting this culture. For example, running cost of company will get reduced because of minimal electricity usages. At the same time, employee can give time to their family, which lead to a job satisfaction.
However, no one can deny the fact that the team bonding of a team will get stronger if team member meet frequently and share their thoughts in a formal live gathering, which is not at all possible in virtual gathering like video conferencing. As a result, attachment towards office and colleagues are reduced these days. Secondly, employee may not be serious about his work as there is no one to look after him, while working from home.
To sum up, even though there are few demerits of information technology such as poor bonding in team, reduced seriousness about jobs, the merits have definitely outnumbered negatives as cost reduction and employee satisfaction are the two top most priority for any organisation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 383, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...use of seamless internet connection and new invention of software, service provider can resol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15954415954 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80744042488 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.1193566633 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.357142857 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0714285714 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186051791393 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656193733094 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426415769439 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104221424248 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438421331799 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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