The threat of nuclear weapons maintains the world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far out-weight the disadvantages.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that nuclear weapons play a fundamental part in maintaining the world peace and even help to supply cheap and clean energy. In my opinion, however, the pros of nuclear technology do more harm than good.
On the one hand, nuclear technology brings certain positive values to the world. Firstly, fossil fuels like oil and gas are running out and nuclear power is a relatively sustainable source of energy. Also, building power stations are cleaner than fossil fuel power stations. Secondly, using nuclear technology reduces carbon dioxide releasing to the environment that may result in environmental degradation, global warming as well as has devastating effects on the atmosphere of the planet. Finally, nuclear power can help produce electricity without wasting natural resources such as coal, gas and oil.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that nuclear power exerts more pernicious impacts than beneficial ones. It cannot be denied that building nuclear power stations waste a plethora of money than other kinds of stations. To illustrate, electricity in nuclear power station are approximately three times as expensive as wind stations. Furthermore, nuclear waste disposal has become a significant issue worldwide as there is currently no way to decontaminate radioactive materials and many people worry that terrorists could steal radioactive materials. Moreover, it is much safer to produce energy from renewable sources of energy including solar and wind since these materials can be easily found in nature.
In conclusion, although nuclear power has enhanced our lives in some aspects, I personally reckon that
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n some aspects, I personally reckon that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45275590551 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83671457745 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622047244094 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4775057834 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.538461538 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8461538462 7.06120827912 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34272563534 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127122570904 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686081797481 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215512564049 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809137341763 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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