Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below.
You should write at least 150 words.
The line chart shows how rates of smoking in someland between men and women starting from 1960-to-2000.
According to the data, in 1960, there were many men smoking than women in someland. The number of women who did smoke increased to realize 190-person in 1965. Furthermore, from 1965-to-1970, women of smoking stayed constant, followed by the line graph inclined this previous smoking approximately 320-society. Moreover, the smoker of the females decreased gradually in 1980 until 2000.
On the other hand, the smoker of the men declined gradually from 1960-to-1970, achieved 500-community. In additional, the men of the lighted cigarette fluctuated wildly around 380-male in 1970 until 1990. Furthermore, in 1995, the boys decreased significantly to total (approximately 250-person). In contrast to men diving steady, women peaked than felt slightly.
In conclusion, the percentage smoking of the men used to fall gradually; meanwhile, women surged and then plunged slowly.
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Sentence: Furthermore, from 1965-to-1970, women of smoking stayed constant, followed by the line graph inclined this previous smoking approximately 320-society.
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Sentence: In contrast to men diving steady, women peaked than felt slightly.
Description: The fragment peaked than felt is rare
Sentence: The line chart shows how rates of smoking in someland between men and women starting from 1960-to-2000.
Description: what is the verb for 'rates'?
Sentence: According to the data, in 1960, there were many men smoking than women in someland.
Error: someland Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.8 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 2.857 7.5
No. of Words: 148 200
Minimum 150 words wanted
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
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No. of Different Words: 91 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.488 4.0
Average Word Length: 5.412 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.95 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 59 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 48 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 38 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.8 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 2.857 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.41 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.621 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.107 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4