On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
describe the item you lost
explain where you lost the it
tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I lost my iPhone in my recent vacation to Singapore. The overall experience was good except for the loss of my gadget.
As I purchased my phone a few months ago and it looks brand new in condition. The cost of a phone is nearly 700 USD dollars, and a leather case which was attached to the mobile is 100 USD dollars.
During my visit to Singapore, I used to travel by local taxi and always make sure that the phone is present in my pocket. However, on my last day, I was in a hurry to board my scheduled flight, and accidentally phone dropped from my pocket in that cab, and I didn’t realize till the time when I board the flight. I call to taxi customer service, but they could able to help it.
The insurance plan which I took from your company covers all types of electronic as well as personal items. I have attached the invoice copy of my mobile phone and cover. I am requesting you to recover my loss amount as per the insurance policy.
I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
Yours Faithfully,
Gaurav
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ss amount as per the insurance policy. I look forward to hearing from you at the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, so, well, except for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32682926829 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4378240949 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60487804878 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4142926644 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9166666667 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147132832548 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607906181212 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632421933082 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914114587266 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693256802319 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 12.4159519038 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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