There is little justification for society to make extraordinary efforts — especially at a great cost in money and jobs — to save endangered animal or plant species.
The author contends that there is little explanation for thr society to make extrsordinary efforts to preserve endangered species. To which I completely agree upon and think that it is our responsibility to preserve species.
Primarily, we humans have been exploiting animals in the name of sports; like hunting, and for medicinal purposes and for embellishments, similar is the case for plants. this extreme level of exploitation led to plummet of these species's population and hence made them endangered. so, it is our duty that we maintain the balance of the Earth's ecosystem and make efforts and extreme efforts if needed to preserve these species as it is a result of our opprobrium act.
Secondly, as these are on the verge of extinction so it requires great care. these species should be always under observation. this is because the species endemic to the area have been either modified by humans or let us simply suppose became unsuitable and hence relocation is required and for them an virtual environment is formed. The environment might include a small pond to a very prohibitive resource allocation and also deployment for of humans for regulating the space, and to keep a check on them.
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- Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. 58
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree 16
- There is little justification for society to make extraordinary efforts — especially at a great cost in money and jobs — to save endangered animal or plant species. 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 58.6224719101 39% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 2235.4752809 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 200.0 442.535393258 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.55969084622 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93087017795 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 215.323595506 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 704.065955056 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8289311998 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.444444444 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179024527658 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725205507974 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870683340439 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133412791835 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726065071606 0.0667264976115 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 100.480337079 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.