The world has been an enormous increase in flight for leisure, business and commercial purposes around the world over recent years.what do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of such flights.Do you think flights should be taxed more?
There is an upward trend in the usage of flight for individuals and economic purposes these day . Besides exceptional merits brought down by airline industry , it leaves a grave consequences which need being emphasized .
By flying, the gap between other countries will be narrowed. Time saving is as a result of taking a flight instead of other modes of transport . Moreover , creating a conditions for faster movement helps travellers go overseas easily , meaning that association between man in all the corners of the world will be forged . Another exclusive features of flight is carrying commodities . Not only hold a large amount of goods with high-speed do it also can remain products in a good conditions.This has been proved that delicate goods such as exotic flowers can be exported without damage.
Apart from the benefit,it has considerable drawbacks . The greatest concern is evironment contamination . Flying at high speed also means requiring more material and making a noise which affects resident living near airports or even develop epidemic diseases . No less important things is flying accident which takes a toll .
To conclusion , Flights which produce facilities are also a cause of concern problems.Therefore, the government should place a stringent taxes on regular travelers to save the planet for next generation .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, moreover, so, therefore, apart from, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40865384615 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05857182658 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.75 0.561755894193 134% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.3668539323 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.75 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15813562702 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461304678418 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403488422101 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083448689668 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438047031945 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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